Time, with Its quiet waiting,
Silent wanting, shameful visage
From within. Standing gately
All around me, keeping
Quiet in the din.
we do not, within it all, accept
At all Its silence and Its rage.
As quietly, It gingerly
Runs lengthened fingers
'Cross our page.
Sweet Time,
Old Time,
Old Father, time
To go
Before the lights within,
Without blow out
And take us derelicts
In tow.
(Screaming, fitfully)
Be kind, Old Time! Forget
That claim that on us You
Now hold:
To keep us silenced and
Forever thus entombed
Within Your fold!
(somber now...)
Sweet Time,
Quiet Time, We
Have such little time, you know;
To waste a-not
And wanting what we
Should have always known
Would be more fanciful than real,
More tamed demure intoxication than
The constructs of our steel and hardy
Tongue, thus lashing out, foolhardy
In its rage against Kind Time,
Sweet Quiet Time,
Whose fingers turn each page
From book to boundless energies,
Thus floating in the squall
Of aftermaths of aftermaths,
Alive, despite it all.
As Time,
Sweet Time,
Sweet Eager Time and I,
Most effortlessly, hand-in-hand
Above it all shall fly
To distances most distant and
Most definitively new;
Where all that's left is what We've done,
Not what We've meant to do; and
Quiet Time,
Sweet Silent Time,
Sweet Loving Friend and I
Shall, innocence now lost and gone,
Be Heirs to every cry
That once had kept Us
Silenced gately, thus
Looking on, demure;from where We'd
Sought and even fraught
Without comfort or a cure that
Seemed a-right and rightly so, for
Time, thus ticking on had
One desire: to feed Its fire and
Keep Us through till dawn.
(pause, reflect, begin anew)
Sweet Time,
Quiet Time,
Quiet Time, whose voice I share,
Lead me not down leaden paths
That end in deep despair;
But if, Sweet Time,
My Quiet Time, my
Final time is nigh,
Then grant me this, my
Final wish, and let
The We be I.
3 comments:
Original: Written in a notepad application on my phone while standing in line to reconcile a very expensive parking ticket.
Muse: Sophia D. (who has been told by her doctors that the cancer she has is killing her, yet she has convinced herself to keep on living just to spite them all).
Date: 29 December 2010
Helpful Notes & Hints:
Noting the capitalization of the pronouns in this piece is integral to fully understanding the breadth of its meaning.
Here's a hint: there is a time when we may find that Time is very much a part of Us, though we may be separated from Time at times, we sometimes find that Time has found that We are all companions with It.
If you need another hint still, check the next comment for the spoiler.
In this poem, I take a journey with Time and become one with It. Time is always capitalized, being quite important and perhaps a name, therefore, when Time and I are traveling as companions, the word "we" would be "We" because Time is included as a part of that which makes me whole.
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